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SWOT 0 [Completed] and 1-4

[Announcement: Yes, that’s right; Onemanga officially closes down today. In honour of one of the best manga-sharing sites out there, here’s a manga post (before I can’t access it anymore) RIP Onemanga ;_;]

THE IRONY IT BURNS

In a Beelzebub-esque delinquent-highschool place, where people with swords and maple-leaf shields fight all day, a NEW TRANSFER STUDENT COMES!

He is known as…

MANABIZAKI is a white-haired guy who studies a lot. Thusly, he is a GENIUS. Anyways, he decides to kill a bunch of people ’cause they’re interrupting his studying by being loud and rude.

He wants to ATTEND TOUDAI and work for NASA because this school has a HIGH RATE of people going to TOUDAI

BUT THAT’S A LIE

BECAUSE ICHIGO LIVES HERE

THEY'RE ZANPAKUTOS YOU IDIOT

Anyways some weak guy called IWASHIDA decides to STALK Manabizaki ’cause he wants to GET STRONGAR

And then they find some girl named Nene HASUNO who PUNCHES A BUNCH OF DELINQUENTS

So MANABIZAKI shows his MANLY TSUNDERENESS

Some random baddy comes and does random baddy stuff, he fights with Manabizaki and loses, etc. etc. etc. blah blah blah

So that’s the end of the one-shot.

Chapter one’s exactly the same, except HE HAS RED HAIR SHANKS

Chapter two’s exactly the same, except they fight MORE PEOPLE

Chapter three’s exactly the same, but some EVIL NINJAS COME

Chapter four’s exactly the same, but Manabizaki PUNCHES MORE PEOPLE

…yeah.

…If there’s one thing I’ve learned while making this post, it’s that trying to make a post of 4 chapters that say the exact same thing gets boring, /fast/.

This story seems way too similar to Beelzebub – some overpowered guy punches a bunch of underpowered people in a school full of delinquents. Then again, it is Shonen Jump – what manga doesn’t have an overpowered guy punching a bunch of underpowered people?

It has potential, but I think it’ll have to revert to supernatural stuff really soon – stories like these last no longer than 20 chapters, because after that there’s noone to punch anymore.

I’m not sure what else to say, so… till next time?

One-Shot (SWOT Chapter 0) Overall Rating: 4/10 (Good)

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